The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagrams illustrate the
man made
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man-made
process
of Add an article
the process
cement
production and the Use synonyms
concrete making
process for construction purposes.
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concrete-making
Overall
, the Linking Words
cement
-making procedure includes several devices Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
crusher
, mixer, rotating heater and Correct article usage
a crusher
a
grinder. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, there are defined Linking Words
percentage
of each raw material to produce good quality concrete.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
As raw
Change preposition
Raw
materials
of Use synonyms
cement
, limestone and clay Use synonyms
is
used. Change the verb form
are
Firstly
, both these Linking Words
materials
go through a crusher and become powder. In the next step, the crushed limestone and clay are well mixed in a mixer and travel to a heater. Use synonyms
This
heater intakes fire from a separate device and rotates continuously in Linking Words
in
order to heat the mixed limestone and clay properly. In the following stage, Remove the redundancy
apply
heated
mixture goes through a grinder and becomes Add an article
the heated
cement
. Use synonyms
As
the final stage, Change preposition
In
cement
is packed in bags to deliver to the market.
In terms of producing concrete, it requires four main input Use synonyms
materials
(Use synonyms
cement
, water, sand and gravel). Use synonyms
Besides
, in order to produce Linking Words
high quality
concrete, it is required to add raw Add a hyphen
high-quality
materials
in Use synonyms
correct
proportions. In Correct article usage
the correct
details
, 15% Fix the agreement mistake
detail
cement
should be added with 10% of water to the concrete mixer, Use synonyms
Linking Words
while
including 25% sand and 50% gravel. Correct word choice
apply
Finally
, it should mix well prior to the use in Linking Words
building
process.Add an article
the building
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, materials with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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