You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, •Let your landlord know that you will be leaving •Thank you landlord for his/her help • Tel him/her about your friend

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Smith, I am writing to inform you of my leave on the upcoming Friday. It has been a great journey for me to stay at your place for the

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three years. As I have recently received a letter of acceptance to work at Microsoft, I have decided to move to New York for a new chapter of life. Ever since I moved here in 2014, you have been helping me familiarize everything here in Canada. For that, I cannot express my gratitude towards you enough and would like to invite you in advance to New York for a fun tour once I settle there.

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, I would like you to know that a friend of mine is interested in renting

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flat unit and wondering if you could accept a student tenet. He came here to study for his undergraduate degree

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, your place would be a perfect spot for him. I will be missing you. Best wishes, Robert Lee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to inform you that...
I will be vacating the apartment on [date]...
I have greatly appreciated...
Your assistance with... has been invaluable...
I would like to recommend my friend, [Friend's Name], who is interested in renting the flat...
I believe [Friend's Name] would be a trustworthy and respectful tenant...
Could you possibly meet with [Friend's Name] to discuss this further?...
Thank you once again for all your help and understanding...
Please let me know if there are any formalities I need to complete before moving out...

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