The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of British academics in an English University that could speak more than one
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including English in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, Spanish was the most spoken
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in the two years and German was the least.
In addition
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, the number of students that could speak other languages had fallen. In the year 2000, less than a third of students could only master Spanish,
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however
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its number increased by 5% in 10 years. Another increase of 5% is seen in mastering another
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and speaking more than two other languages.
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the ratio of German speakers remained the same, the French had decreased.The most noticeable change is seen in people that couldn´t speak another
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than English. Its numbers saw the most decrease from a fifth to 10%.
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, Spanish is the most mastered
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and French is the least.
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