The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart demonstrates information about the percentage of
household
in owned and Fix the agreement mistake
households
ranted
rental Correct your spelling
rented
accommodation
in the UK countries including, England and Wales. The units are measured in percentage from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, it is clear that
the amount of household
in owned Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
increased over the period shown. However
, the same figure
for rented accommodation
followed a downward trend.
Starting from 1918 to 2011, despite there was a marginally
growth to reach Change the adverb
marginal
peak
of 70 in the indication for owned Add an article
the peak
a peak
accommodation
from about 22. After that, this
figure
experienced a reduction around
5 till the final year.
Remarkably, ranted Change preposition
of around
accommodation
was the highest of
around 77 %. Change preposition
at
Despite
, Correct pronoun usage
thisDespite
this
figure
witnessed a sharply
decline to reach a low of just under 30 in 2001. After that, Change the adverb
sharp
this
figure
increased by 5 in the final year.Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on
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