Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries. Why is this? What effects does this have on society?

In
this
modern era, there is an increasing number of
students
who are
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in many majors at universities. Some people believe that there are some universities insufficient
students
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science
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major
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.
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from a variety of reasons and it has manifold drawbacks to
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society. There is no doubt that
science
subject
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are rarely chosen. A number of
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may account for
science
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a
subject
which
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always considered
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difficult for many seniors. If
students
choose these
subject
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, they need to work hard and certainly
passionate
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about their
subject
and work, but they waste a lot of time and energy consuming. The most familiar example of
this
is in Viet Nam, there are plenty of
students
studying at universities who all make the choice to pursue a range of majors
such
as multimedia communications, business and marketing. These subjects are increasing availability and easy to get
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in the future.
However
,
science
is
also
pretty a useful and interesting
subject
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others. Indeed, it seems quite that
science
is very rare in today’s countries. It can
also
be argued that the most consequences
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with the issues.
This
will bring about a profound influence on some careers in the future
such
as doctors, engineers,
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and environmentalist
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environmentalist
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.
Less
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scientific
degree
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will lead to a lack of
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in some companies nowadays. A clear example is that, In conclusion, a variety of
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give
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rise to the diminishing popularity of
science
subjects.
Nevertheless
, I feel that if not enough
students
study
science
will have a
far reaching
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impact on the individual and
productivity
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the productivity
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of society.
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  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
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  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
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  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
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  • public health services
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