WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three

types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
We have cancelled the following invoice as part of
price
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the price
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adjustment since
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an incorrect
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price was published
at
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in
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the first place and later, we
have
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apply
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performed invoicing
the
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for the
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same sales order
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