The charts bellow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts bellow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie chart depicts the
percentage
of water used by six nations (North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
,
Africa
, Central
Asia
, and Southeast
Asia
) for three purposes industrial, agricultural, and domestic uses.
overall
, the
percentage
of agricultural
use
overtook high figures for
percentage
, on other hand, domestic
use
was taken less number
percentage
. we can see three cities in
Africa
, central, and southeast
Asia
, have approximately figures in 80%, in the remaining area of North
America
and
Europe
, a high
percentage
for the same purposes
use
.
In addition
, industrial
use
in
Africa
and central
Asia
is different by around 2%,
however
in agricultural
use
by around 4%, that’s the mean
percentage
in these two cities approximate for uses.
Nevertheless
, domestic
use
in Central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
has the same
percentage
7.
However
,
Europe
cities less than
use
water
percentage
for agricultural purposes. The other parts of the world
use
less than a quarter. Domestic
use
is the least with under a quarter in
Africa
, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
and more than a quarter in North
America
, South
America
, and
Europe
.
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  • Allocation
  • Sustainability
  • Efficiency
  • Industrialization
  • Domestic sector
  • Agricultural sector
  • Global trends
  • Water scarcity
  • Resource management
  • Technological innovations
  • Water recycling
  • Population growth
  • International cooperation
  • Water wastage
  • Sustainable practices
  • Water footprint
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