The diagram below shows the process of electricity production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of electricity production.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process details the steps in the production of
electricity
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that energy production involves the combination of coal and oxygen undergoing various chemical processes including heating that results in gases that
then
power two different types of turbines to produce
electricity
. In the earliest stages, coal is transported by a ramp to a furnace where it is heated and combined with oxygen. The waste byproduct of
this
is slag and the desired
gas
(raw syngas) is
then
sent for removal of its harmful contaminants, CO2, mercury, and sulphur
,
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before the purified
gas
is used to run a
gas
turbine connected to a generator.
This
is the first way that
electricity
is created.
However
, the
gas
turbine using the purified syngas
also
produces excess hot gases and these are utilised in a heat recovery steam generator (which releases flue gases into the atmosphere). The generator produces steam which turns the turbines of a steam turbine to generate additional
electricity
.
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