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The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
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The line chart details the number of individuals working in manufacturing, services, and
agriculture
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 over a 50-year period in the United States. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that
agriculture
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 has and will continue to decline greatly from being the most to least common occupation,
while
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 the opposite is true for service jobs. The trend for manufacturing is less consistent though it is anticipated to be roughly stable
overall
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. In 1975, the vast majority of
workers
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 (60
million
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) were farmers, a figure in stark contrast to those in manufacturing (9
million
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) and
agriculture
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 (10
million
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). After a two-year period with little change for all jobs, there was a steep decline in the number of agricultural
workers
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 to 42
million
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 by 1979. In the same year, the data for service
workers
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 began to rise consistently, with an expected peak of 90
million
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 by 2025. In comparison,
workers
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 in
agriculture
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 have fallen at varying rates and the final statistic is anticipated to be just over 10
million
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 by 2025. The number for manufacturing rose to 40
million
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 in 1980,
where
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when
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 the figures for all categories converged, before a rapid decline that will continue to 2025 and end at 10
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words agriculture, workers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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