You recently travelled by train on a long journey and you experienced various problems. Write a letter to the train company's head office. In your letter, - Give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat - explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction - ask about what action will be taken to improve the service You should write atleat 150 words

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in

regards

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to the inconvenience that I faced during my journey from Mumbai to Bangalore. I boarded on Malati Express from Mumbai which was scheduled to arrive on platform number 5. I was

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to my native place to spend my summer holidays.

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was on March 2nd, and the

seat

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that was allotted was B-21 in a first-class compartment.

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seat

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was a window

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to be more specific. The journey started out

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pretty

good, but

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I noticed that there were no good food services. I even reached the pantry area to check if there

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any issues but the waiter sent me back to my

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telling

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someone would be there to take my order. I waited for three more hours, but nobody came to take the food order.

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, the air conditioner stopped working for

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hours as well. I hope that you would take

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actions

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so that other people who travel

wont

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face

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of issues. Yours faithfully, Vidya Tumkur

Submitted by vidyavi0895 on Fri Mar 03 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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