You recently travelled by train on a long journey and you experienced various problems. Write a letter to the train company's head office. In your letter, - Give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat - explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction - ask about what action will be taken to improve the service You should write atleat 150 words

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter in

regards

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to the inconvenience that I faced during my journey from Mumbai to Bangalore. I boarded on Malati Express from Mumbai which was scheduled to arrive on platform number 5. I was

traveling

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travelling

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to my native place to spend my summer holidays.

This

was on March 2nd, and the

seat

that was allotted was B-21 in a first-class compartment.

This

seat

was a window

seat

to be more specific. The journey started out

preety

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pretty

good, but

then

I noticed that there were no good food services. I even reached the pantry area to check if there

was

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were

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any issues but the waiter sent me back to my

seat

telling

that

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me that

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someone would be there to take my order. I waited for three more hours, but nobody came to take the food order.

In addition

to

this

, the air conditioner stopped working for

few

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a few

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hours as well. I hope that you would take

necessary

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the necessary

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actions

,

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apply

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so that other people who travel

wont

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won't

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face

these kind

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of issues. Yours faithfully, Vidya Tumkur