You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mr Lee. My name is Alex Levi and I am a student

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your part-time evening program.

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is a very interesting and helpful course for my current job and I already have started to use my knowledge ,

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I am writing to you to explain that I can not continue studying

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the course and I would like to cancel. As you know I work a full-time job as a senior heavy-duty technician for the

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5 years and recently I have been promoted to the service manager of the main branch of my company. One of my duty is to be at construction sites or offices to support the technicians in the evenings.

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I could not

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be at your lessons at the same time and have to lose the lessons. I would like to cancel the frontal studying at the university and try to sign up for

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course. I know that

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much longer and more complicated than the evening one, but I do not have a choice. I hoop to meet you at my graduation. Yours faithfully. Alex Levi.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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