The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan
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The pie charts give information about how the workers spend their time in various activities in a particular country in a half a century.
Overall
, it is clear the work was still the largest segment in the two charts with an increase in it. accompanied by increasing in it all.
Firstly
, the majority of the time every 2 years goes to the top 2 where are working and sleeping were 33% and 32% in 1958. Hence
, working had slight growth of 42%. on the
contrary
decreased the rate of sleeping by about 7% in 2008.
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,increases in other for details, travel to work from 2% upward to fourfold in 2008.Moreover
, relaxing at home and playing sports or other those figures rose to 13% and 8% respectively ( from 8% and 6%). otherwise
, going out accounted for 19% in 1958 fell to 6% at the end
of the period and hit the low point.Submitted by jjooojjooo2020 on
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