The line graph below shows the relationship between age and crime in the UK in the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The chart reveals how
age
and crime
have been related in 2002 in the UK. The line graph deals with ages between 0-60. The first thing we can notice is the fact that the crime
rate
remains steady from the age
of 0 to 8, so it tells us that kids below 8 years old never committed illicit.
Then
, the crime
rate
starts slightly rising and it strongly increases from te
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the
age
of twelve by the
65%. The graph keeps rising reaching its peak at the Correct article usage
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age
of 20,
when the Remove the comma
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crime
rate
is 80%. From the highest point, it begins its decline: from the age
of 20 to 28 the percentage dicreases
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decreases
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the
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rate
keeps declining, dropping below the
10% for people over 60s.
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it is clear that
the majority of the illegal actions of last
year in the UK have been committed by young people between 12-28, while
the level of offences of adults is considerably lower. Altought
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group who commited
the less criminal acts is the one that goes from 0 to 8 years old.Correct your spelling
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