The line graph below shows the relationship between crime and age in the UK in the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the relationship between crime and age in the UK in the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the relationship between crime and age in the UK in the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart reveals the way in which
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and crime have been related in 2002 in the UK. The line graph deals with ages between 0-60. The first thing we can notice is the fact that the crime rate remains steady from the
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of 0 to 8, so it tells us that kids below 8 years old never committed illicit.
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, the crime level starts slightly rising and it strongly increases from the
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of twelve by the 65%. The graph keeps rising and it reaches its peak at the
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of 20
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when the rate is 80%. From the highest point, it begins its decline: from the
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of 20 to 28 the percentage decreases by
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65%. The level continues to reduce itself, dropping below
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10% for people over 60s. In conclusion, from the
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it is clear that
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the majority of the illegal actions of
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year in the UK have been committed by young people between 12-28,
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the level of offences of adults is considerably lower.
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, the
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group who committed the less criminal acts is the one that goes from 0 to 8 years old.

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