Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree ot disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Presently, pupils were depended more on vehicles,
many
trial and error methods carried out by researchers to reduce of using their goods. Correct word choice
and many
Finally
, they concluded by raising a
petrol rate so some Correct article usage
the
expection
could find in reduction of using Correct your spelling
expectation
automobile
. Here, Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
some
of Add a missing verb
are some
pros
and cons of enhancing petrol Correct article usage
the pros
price
in the below paragraphs.
Almost everybody has four as well Fix the agreement mistake
prices
two- wheeler
transport mode in their house. Thereby, they will take and move anywhere they want, which leads to huge traffic and creates pollution. In the megacity, traffic is Correct your spelling
two-wheeler
major
issue faced by the people so Add an article
a major
the major
that
in order to reduce the problem, the government decided to hike the fuel rate and they expect it is one Correct word choice
apply
solutions
to control air dust Change to a singular noun
solution
along with
heavy noise production in the town. But this
idea was never successful because the percentage of cars as well bikes is more than earlier. By making more charges it indirectly brought into
the booming of the country.
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apply
In addition
, there were many ways for controlling the using their own vehicles. Firstly
, all the public, as well as
the private sectors,as well as
the private sectors should implement a common bus route for all employees. By this
action around some number of a vehicle will be reduced in future and traffic will be come to lesser. Secondly
, the administrator should bring an electric public transportation method so that utilisation of fuel will be gradually into a few count
. Once it is found successful in producing minor pollution Fix the agreement mistake
counts
then
the same procedures can be initiated in all personal automobiles. Thus
, these actions could bring the exact solutions for controlling problems facing today.
In conclusion, by means of reducing the cost of petrol will never be a perfect solution for resolving current issues. Therefore
, I totally disagree with the statement.Submitted by aishwaryarkunnummal on
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