Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree ot disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Presently, pupils were depended more on vehicles,
many
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trial and error methods carried out by researchers to reduce of using their goods.
Finally
, they concluded by raising
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petrol rate so some
expection
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expectation
could find in reduction of using
automobile
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. Here,
some
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of
pros
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the pros
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and cons of enhancing petrol
price
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in the below paragraphs. Almost everybody has four as well
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transport mode in their house. Thereby, they will take and move anywhere they want, which leads to huge traffic and creates pollution. In the megacity, traffic is
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issue faced by the people so
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in order to reduce the problem, the government decided to hike the fuel rate and they expect it is one
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to control air dust
along with
heavy noise production in the town. But
this
idea was never successful because the percentage of cars as well bikes is more than earlier. By making more charges it indirectly brought
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the booming of the country.
In addition
, there were many ways for controlling the using their own vehicles.
Firstly
, all the public,
as well as
the private sectors,
as well as
the private sectors should implement a common bus route for all employees. By
this
action around some number of a vehicle will be reduced in future and traffic will be come to lesser.
Secondly
, the administrator should bring an electric public transportation method so that utilisation of fuel will be gradually into a few
count
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. Once it is found successful in producing minor pollution
then
the same procedures can be initiated in all personal automobiles.
Thus
, these actions could bring the exact solutions for controlling problems facing today. In conclusion, by means of reducing the cost of petrol will never be a perfect solution for resolving current issues.
Therefore
, I totally disagree with the statement.
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