The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of products transported by four methods of transport including
road
,
water
, rail and
pipeline
in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the railway had a fluctuating trend from 1974 to 2002,
while
other means of transportation by
road
,
water
and
pipeline
rose slowly in the same years.
To begin
, in 1974, products transported in the UK by
road
,
water
and
pipeline
had increasing trends, starting at around 70, 39 and 3
million
tonnes
respectively. In terms of
road
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roads
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, it went up fluctuation between 1974 and 1994,
then
it climbed significantly to approximately 98
million
tonnes
, which is the highest rate
at the end
of the period.
Next,
water
and
pipeline
experienced a slight increase from begin to around the year 1980,
whereas
pipeline
remained constant at around just under 20
million
tonnes
in 1982 until around 1992 and still levelled off at about 22
million
tonnes
between 1995 and 2002.
In contrast
, after 1982, the
water
stayed at the same rate at about 58
million
tonnes
and dropped in the year 1998 to about 55
million
tonnes
. After that, it rose dramatically to just over 60
million
tonnes
at the end
of the period.
According to
the railway, it decreased gradually from the beginning to around the year 1984.
After
this
, the figure showed a fluctuating trend between 1984 and 2002 at around 41
million
tonnes
. In
comparison
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the railway fluctuated trend much more than other transportations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, water, pipeline, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overview
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Mode of transport
  • Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Goods
  • Transported
  • Significant
  • Noticeable
  • General trend
  • Time span
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