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The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the trends of household recycling rates locally in UK, France and
Germany
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 from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
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, the recycling rates in UK and
Germany
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 had a
rise
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rising
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 trend through these years. On the counterpart, the past decade witnessed a
dramatically
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dramatic
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 decrease
rates
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in rates
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 in France.
To begin
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 with, France contributed the highest
rate
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 in 2005, which was 50%.
However
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, the
rate
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 decreased significantly and got the same amount
with
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as
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UK
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the UK
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 in 2009.
This
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decrease
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decreasing
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 trend stopped
until
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in
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 2013,
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then
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and then
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 it started to rise quickly, which was 10% between 2013 to 2015.
Although
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Germany
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 used to take the lowest proportion in 2005(20%), the recycling
rate
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 soared and reached 40% in 2010, which is the UK’s
rate
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 in 2009.
Then
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 the
rate
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of
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in
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Germany
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 reached
the
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its
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 peak in 2015(58%). UK’s recycling
rate
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also
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 has a developed rise, but it remains steady at 40% between 2007 to 2009. After
that
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,that
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 the
rate
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 rose to 60% in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional household recycling rates
  • overall trend
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • fluctuations
  • marginal decline
  • notable drop
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • year-on-year growth
  • data patterns
  • rate of change
  • noteworthy milestones
  • disparities
  • environmental policies
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