The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The pie charts
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the ratio of , how climate
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to
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versus projects in six
diferent
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different
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the earth.
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uses
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weather
for three conditions. Example Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic
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. Apart
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that Africa , South East Asia
ans
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and
South America
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weather
in planting. It
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84% ,81%,
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% eventually , but Europe and North America low used of
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to Agriculture.
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