The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000.

The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780,  1860, and 2000.
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three periods of development of a town, called Willington in the years
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1780, 1860, and 2000. Excluding the
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, other facilities had a big change, especially the removal of farms and woods but
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in housing areas, road infrastructure,
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and educational conveniences.
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, it seems that Willington became more modern and convenient through the periods. By looking at the maps, we can conclude that the
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remained unspoiled from the north to the south of the Western side, but a new crossing bridge was built in the middle of the
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from west to east. In 2000, a big wetland was published to feed the birds with an object to attract visitors at the southern of the
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. At the same time, many shops were opened along the east bank of the
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to the south.
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half of the farms in the
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decreased in 1860, and
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it was totally cleared out. On other hand,
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the northeast corner, the number of households witnessed a dramatic rising trend, at 200 and 500 greatly.
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, the forest was cut down a lot in 1860, and after
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it was removed to make way for the appearance of two schools and three sports courts. Noticeably, the accommodation area was linked with the
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and the schooling zone with two straight roads.
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