The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000.
The maps
inclines
three periods of development of a town, called Willington in the years Change the verb form
incline
of
1780, 1860, and 2000. Excluding the Change preposition
apply
river
, other facilities had a big change, especially the removal of farms and woods but increase
in housing areas, road infrastructure, Correct article usage
an increase
commercial
and educational conveniences. Correct word choice
and commercial
As a result
, it seems that Willington became more modern and convenient through the periods. By looking at the maps, we can conclude that the river
remained unspoiled from the north to the south of the Western side, but a new crossing bridge was built in the middle of the river
from west to east. In 2000, a big wetland was published to feed the birds with an object to attract visitors at the southern of the river
. At the same time, many shops were opened along the east bank of the river
to the south. Moreover
, a
half of the farms in the Remove the article
apply
center
decreased in 1860, and Change the spelling
centre
then
it was totally cleared out. On other hand, on
the northeast corner, the number of households witnessed a dramatic rising trend, at 200 and 500 greatly. Change preposition
in
In addition
, the forest was cut down a lot in 1860, and after that
it was removed to make way for the appearance of two schools and three sports courts. Noticeably, the accommodation area was linked with the Add a comma
,that
river
and the schooling zone with two straight roads.Submitted by namle.ivce on
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