You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The following diagram presents the process of making a perfume that contains
oil
.
Overall
, the production of the perfume will go through ten different stages. First of all, they start by putting fire under a glass that has water
inside it in order to heat it. Secondly
, as a result
of heating the water
began to steam and moved towards the aromatic plants. Then
, in this
step, the steam mixed with oil
vapour will go through a condenser so that it will transfer it
from cold Correct pronoun usage
apply
water
into hot water
. After ,that the water
combined with essential oil
will be separated by the separator to produce the essential oil
on its own. Finally
, the last
step of the production is going to be to
Replace the word
too
hydrating
the Change the verb
hydrate
oil
into an aromatic water
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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