The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph
illustrate
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that meals consume in Australia from 1950 to 2010 and
comparison
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during those years.
Its
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clear that
consumption
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the consumption
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rate show for the AUSTRALIA three
differences
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different
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in foods
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foods
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food
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a over
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periods
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of 50 years. Pizza and hamburgers proportion enormously increase but there was
significatly
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significantly
decrease fish and chips.
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graph
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compare
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3 groups at
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different time and gives information about
teenagers
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enjoyments
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. In 1975, the consumption percentage have substantial growth
pizza
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and hamburgers to 1985 and 1990 respectively.
Then
hamburgers slightly rose from 1985 to 1995 and reach a hundred.
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pizza
is
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hit a peak
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over eighty
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stay to constant from 1995 until 2000.
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fish in 1975 high level of
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to
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until
in
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1980.
Thereupon
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period
flucluate
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fluctuate
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interest
also
in 1980
have
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started
gradualy
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gradually
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climb
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to 1985
additionally
,
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period
time
steady
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a steady
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drop rate
just
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under
fourty
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forty
four
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