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The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph
illustrate
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 that meals consume in Australia from 1950 to 2010 and
comparison
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a comparison
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 during those years.
Its
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 clear that
consumption
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the consumption
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 rate show for the AUSTRALIA three
differences
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in foods
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foods
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food
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 a over
period
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periods
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 of 50 years. Pizza and hamburgers proportion enormously increase but there was
significatly
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significantly
 decrease fish and chips.
Moreover
graph
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the graph
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compare
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 3 groups at
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different time and gives information about
teenagers
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teenagers'
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enjoyments
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enjoyment
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. In 1975, the consumption percentage have substantial growth
pizza
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 and hamburgers to 1985 and 1990 respectively.
Then
 hamburgers slightly rose from 1985 to 1995 and reach a hundred.
However
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 pizza
is
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hit a peak
just
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 over eighty
thus
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and thus
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 stay to constant from 1995 until 2000.
Nevertheless
 fish in 1975 high level of
period
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 suddenly have
decline
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to
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until
in
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1980.
Thereupon
this
period
flucluate
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fluctuate
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 interest
also
 in 1980
have
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 started
gradualy
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gradually
gradual
climb
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climbing
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 to 1985
additionally
,
next
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the next
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period
 time
steady
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a steady
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 drop rate
just
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of just
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 under
fourty
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forty
four
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