The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph
illustrate
that meals consume in Australia from 1950 to 2010 and Change the verb form
illustrates
comparison
during those years.
Correct article usage
a comparison
Its
clear that Replace the word
It's
It is
consumption
rate show for the AUSTRALIA three Correct article usage
the consumption
differences
Replace the word
different
Change preposition
in foods
foods
a over Fix the agreement mistake
food
period
of 50 years. Pizza and hamburgers proportion enormously increase but there was Fix the agreement mistake
periods
significatly
decrease fish and chips. Correct your spelling
significantly
Moreover
graph
Correct article usage
the graph
compare
3 groups at Change the verb form
compares
the
different time and gives information about Correct article usage
apply
teenagers
Change noun form
teenagers'
teenager's
enjoyments
.
In 1975, the consumption percentage have substantial growth Fix the agreement mistake
enjoyment
pizza
and hamburgers to 1985 and 1990 respectively. Change preposition
in pizza
Then
hamburgers slightly rose from 1985 to 1995 and reach a hundred. However
pizza Add a comma
,However
is
hit a peak Unnecessary verb
apply
just
over eighty Change preposition
of just
thus
stay to constant from 1995 until 2000.
Correct word choice
and thus
Nevertheless
fish in 1975 high level of period
furthermore
suddenly have decline
Change the verb form
declined
to
until Change preposition
apply
in
1980. Change preposition
apply
Thereupon
this
period
flucluate
interest Correct your spelling
fluctuate
fluctuated
also
in 1980 have
startedChange the verb form
has
gradualy
Correct your spelling
gradually
gradual
climb
to 1985 Wrong verb form
climbing
additionally
, next
Correct article usage
the next
period
time steady
drop rate Correct article usage
a steady
just
under Change preposition
of just
fourty
.Correct your spelling
forty
four
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