The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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that meals consume in Australia from 1950 to 2010 and

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during those years.

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clear that

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the consumption

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rate show for the AUSTRALIA three

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in foods

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foods

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food

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a over

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of 50 years. Pizza and hamburgers proportion enormously increase but there was

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significantly

decrease fish and chips.

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compare

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different time and gives information about

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enjoyments

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. In 1975, the consumption percentage have substantial growth

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and hamburgers to 1985 and 1990 respectively.

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hamburgers slightly rose from 1985 to 1995 and reach a hundred.

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pizza

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over eighty

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stay to constant from 1995 until 2000.

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fish in 1975 high level of

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1980.

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in 1980

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started

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to 1985

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the next

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drop rate

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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