Write a letter to a local authority by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. -Mention about the current sports facilities available - What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? - How would the new sports facilities be a help for the people in your age group?

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to request you to have additional
sports
facilities in our area, At the moment, we only have volleyball and tennis court facilities here, which
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very useful for some
sports loving
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people in our community, but my age group like so much basketball as
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sports
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sports
, so we request to add a basketball court here in our area
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so that my age group can enjoy and play the
sports
that we love. These new basketball facilities that we requested
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a big help not only
me
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but for my age group that likes] these
sports
, because these
sports
intoduced
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introduced
teamwork and friendship
while
playing. On the hand
sports
can
improved
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the physical
strenghts
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strength
strengths
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people and
also
,
some
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people who have sufferings from depression or have a problem, these
sports
can help release
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their
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stress and loneliness. Hoping for your
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answer, Respectfully, Rubenel
Submitted by rubenellaurino on

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