Some people support the idea of imposing taxes on fossil fuels (oil, coal and gas) in order to reduce energy consumption. Others disagree with this approach. Consider the debate and its arguments, and come to your own conclusion.

In

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era of technology, some individuals believe that taxes should be imposed on fossil fuels

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energy usage

among

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society

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others reject

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notion. From my point of

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, I agree

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the above statement as it

contribute

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to lower carbon emission and

improve

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electronic

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product.

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essay will

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elaborate my views, and

thus

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the

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taxes

are implement

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on fossil

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, it

consequently

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the energy consumption by

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the user

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user

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which in turn less carbon emission

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the atmosphere.

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, it creates

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better air quality

throught

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throughout

through

the country and

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the chance of air pollution in the future.

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air infection in America is at

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of cars in the city area which become

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contribution

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to

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issue.

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, it is a good idea for the government to include

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a tax

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tax

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taxing

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fossil

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on fossil

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fuel

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. Another point in

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with

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this

view,

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tax upon these

source

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of energy will improve the demand

on

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electronic products which are

environmetal

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environmental

environmentally

friendly and less unwanted

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that might harm the environment.

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of electronic cars in Japan had

growth

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significantly and the citizen

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to enjoy its benefit.

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, it is crucial for

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in every country to educate their people about new electronic power supplies.

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, fossil

fuel

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cause harmful

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on

people

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health.

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, the best approach to deal with it

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implementing taxes on its use. Hopefully,

this

effort will create a better life for

further

generation

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.