The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of consumed
pizza
, fish and chips and
hamburgers
by Australian adolescents from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
,
while
the
figures
for
pizza
and
hamburgers
increased,
although
fish and chips were the most eaten type of fast food the
figures
for them declined. In 1975, the consumption of
hamburgers
and
pizza
were
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nearly 15 and 5 eating
times
respectively.
Then
the
figures
for both
hamburgers
and
pizza
grew slowly until reaching over 80
times
, and
whereas
the amount of consumed
pizza
remained constant around
this
number, the number of eating
hamburgers
reached 100 per
year
and did not change until 2000.
In contrast
,
however
, fish and chips
was
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were
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the most popular junk food in the
year
1975, its
figures
decreased reaching 80
times
per
year
by 1980. After that, the amount of eaten
hamburgers
by Australian teenagers rose slightly to around 95 and continued falling moderately to two fifth
times
for
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a
year
by 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hamburgers, figures, times, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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