The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the amount of consumed
pizza
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, fish and chips and
hamburgers
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by Australian adolescents from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
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,
while
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the
figures
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for
pizza
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and
hamburgers
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increased,
although
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fish and chips were the most eaten type of fast food the
figures
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for them declined. In 1975, the consumption of
hamburgers
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and
pizza
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were
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nearly 15 and 5 eating
times
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respectively.
Then
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the
figures
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for both
hamburgers
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and
pizza
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grew slowly until reaching over 80
times
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, and
whereas
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the amount of consumed
pizza
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remained constant around
this
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number, the number of eating
hamburgers
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reached 100 per
year
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and did not change until 2000.
In contrast
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,
however
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, fish and chips
was
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were
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the most popular junk food in the
year
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1975, its
figures
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decreased reaching 80
times
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per
year
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by 1980. After that, the amount of eaten
hamburgers
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by Australian teenagers rose slightly to around 95 and continued falling moderately to two fifth
times
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for
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apply
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a
year
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by 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hamburgers, figures, times, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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