The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the life process of silkworms and how silk cloth is produced. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the life cycle of a silkworm consists of 4 stages and silk cloth production is completed in 5 steps. In the first diagram,
initially
, eggs are dropped in a mulberry leaf by moths, after which silkworm larvas emerge from eggs after 10 days. The mulberry leaves are used as a food source by larvas. In the stage
after
this
, larvas are surrounded by silk thread over a period of 1-1.5 mount, which is followed by cocoon formation in approximately a week. The cycle ends when a moth emerges and ultimately the process starts over again.
According to
the next picture, as the first step, some cocoons are picked and put into water. The cocoons are
bolled
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boiled
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before they are unwinded.
As a result
of
this
stage, some threads are produced with a length of 300-900 metres. Once
this
phase is completed, the threads are twisted and put in a pot which is full of dye, following which the twisted threads are weaved and the process ends.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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