The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the food consumption of pizza,

fish

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and

chips

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and

hamburgers

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in Australia by teenagers from 1940 to 2010.

Hamburgers

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showed a dramatic increase from 1975 to 1985 with changes from 10 times eaten per year by teenagers roses to approximately 85. Later, the popularity of

hamburgers

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gradually climbed to more than

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100 in 2000. Pizza

also

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has

the

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similar changes where it has a

slightly

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rise in consumption by youngsters from 5 to over

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85.

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fish

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and

chips

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reveal a

fluctuate

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pattern which is the opposite trait compared to other fast food.

Fish

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and

chips

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declined from over

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100 to around 85 in 1980 and

then

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climbed to 95 in the following 5 years, and later plummeted to approximately 40 in 2000.

Overall

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, pizza and

hamburgers

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showed an increase over

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this

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years,

however

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fish

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and

chips

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illustrates

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a decreasing line

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips, hamburgers with synonyms.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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