The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the food consumption of pizza,
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
in Australia by teenagers from 1940 to 2010.
Hamburgers
showed a dramatic increase from 1975 to 1985 with changes from 10 times eaten per year by teenagers roses to approximately 85. Later, the popularity of
hamburgers
gradually climbed to more than
a
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100 in 2000. Pizza
also
has
the
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similar changes where it has a
slightly
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rise in consumption by youngsters from 5 to over
a
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85.
On the other hand
,
fish
and
chips
reveal a
fluctuate
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pattern which is the opposite trait compared to other fast food.
Fish
and
chips
declined from over
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100 to around 85 in 1980 and
then
climbed to 95 in the following 5 years, and later plummeted to approximately 40 in 2000.
Overall
, pizza and
hamburgers
showed an increase over
this
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years,
however
,
fish
and
chips
illustrates
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a decreasing line
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips, hamburgers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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