The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the food consumption of pizza,
fish
and chips
and hamburgers
in Australia by teenagers from 1940 to 2010.
Hamburgers
showed a dramatic increase from 1975 to 1985 with changes from 10 times eaten per year by teenagers roses to approximately 85. Later, the popularity of hamburgers
gradually climbed to more than a
100 in 2000. Pizza Correct article usage
apply
also
has the
similar changes where it has a Correct article usage
apply
slightly
rise in consumption by youngsters from 5 to over Change the adverb
slight
a
85.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, fish
and chips
reveal a fluctuate
pattern which is the opposite trait compared to other fast food. Change the verb form
fluctuating
Fish
and chips
declined from over a
100 to around 85 in 1980 and Correct article usage
apply
then
climbed to 95 in the following 5 years, and later plummeted to approximately 40 in 2000.
Overall
, pizza and hamburgers
showed an increase over this
years, Correct determiner usage
these
however
, fish
and chips
illustrates
a decreasing lineChange the verb form
illustrate
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