The bar chart below shows percentages of three groups of Australian children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph details the preferences of four types of leisure activities among Australian
children
in three groups in the year 2012.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that watching TV
was the most popular activity
chosen by all teenagers. Reading, doing art and riding the bike was
less common options for kids from 5 to 16 years.
Specifically, there was a positive correlation between increases Correct subject-verb agreement
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ages
and the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
age
children
who would watch TV
in their spare time. Watching TV
is also
apparently the most popular activity
among children
. More or less 90% of them chose to watch TV
when they have time. By contrast
, doing artwork was considered the least common activity
selected by children
for all age groups, which were
lower than 60%.
For reading, no significant difference was seen among the three age groups, and the figures stayed over 60%. In comparison, the figures for 12 to 16 years old Correct subject-verb agreement
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children
saw the highest rate which merely reached 80%, and this
was around 10% higher than that of the 9 to 11 year
age group who anticipate the same Add a hyphen
11-year
activity
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