The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.
It is clear that
there was an increase in the proportion of time mothers dressing
with their kids in Australia Wrong verb form
dressed
while
the number of father
dressing was lower than mother
. The percentage of both of them was 5%.
In homework, there was 60% Fix the agreement mistake
mothers
Change preposition
of mother
mother
Fix the agreement mistake
mothers
doing
homework and 30% Wrong verb form
do
father
Change preposition
of father
.
Playing games with Add a missing verb
do.
father
reached Correct article usage
the father
at
60% but Remove the preposition
apply
mother
fell to 25%. Correct article usage
the mother
In contrast
both of them
Correct pronoun usage
their
rate
peaked at 30%.
Australian Fix the agreement mistake
rates
mother
still decreased to 45% in preparing for Fix the agreement mistake
mothers
children
Change noun form
children's
bed
and Fix the agreement mistake
beds
father
dropped to 50%. The percentage of two of them preparing for bed went down Fix the agreement mistake
fathers
under
5%.Change preposition
by under
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