The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates how much money is being spent on junk food divided by the income. every week in Britain and the graph indicates the changes in the consumption of different kinds of fast foods in the span of 20 years, from 1970 to 1990.
Firstly
, as it is visual, high-income people consume the most junk foods,
whereas
low-income people eat healthier than wealthier individuals. Hamburgers are the most popular fast food among rich and normal-income families and individuals,
while
fish and chips are more popular among the poor. Fish and Chips are mostly bought and used by the ordinary income part of society.
Secondly
, eating hamburgers became a trend in 1975 and has been growing ever since. Fish and Chips had a subtle fall in usage from 1970 to 1985 and
then
rose up from 1985 to 1990, in 5 years. Pizza hasn’t had any sort of
change
Add an article
the change
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in popularity in these 20 years.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Fast food
  • Income groups
  • High-income
  • Low-income
  • Medium-income
  • Hamburgers
  • Fried chicken
  • Fish & chips
  • Consumption
  • Trends
  • Significant increase
  • Decline
  • Popularity
  • Spending patterns
  • Consumption trends
  • Lifestyle
  • Preferences
  • Prices
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