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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those with frequent change jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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Some
people
 think that
people
 who chase a
job
 early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those who frequently change Jobs. I personally  agree . I believe that
people
 who chose a
job
 early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life. In
this
essay
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 I will explain the reasons for my view.
To begin
 with, the main reason to explain why picking and sticking with one
job
 for a long time makes
people
 happier in their occupations is the level of respect achieved and the possibility of being promoted.Regardless of the profession, a skilled worker is looked up to for being acquainted and,
therefore
, their opinion is valued and acknowledged.
As a result
, companies tend to see these employees as business partners and promote them to keep them on the team.
Moreover
, another cogent motive to justify why individuals that build long careers are happier in their profession than those who do not is self-confidence acquired. Inevitably with time,
people
 have faced different problems and found solutions to most of them, gaining
confidence
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the confidence
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 to work with more enthusiasm. In
conclude
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conclusion
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, I somewhat agree that choosing a
job
 early can help
people
 find satisfaction through getting respected and ,
consequently
, promoted
as well as
self-confident
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self-confidence
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 in what they do.
Although
, as in the example aforementioned, sticking with a career for a long time can prevent individuals from finding professional fulfilment.
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