Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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hired

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reputable

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. Others believe that it is not very important to attend

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because having

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and skills is more valued in the industry. Both are valid opinions and I will discuss

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is a dream for most people because when they have finished their

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, the probability to get a good job is bigger. Nowadays, most

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state in their hiring advertisement that they need a

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degree for the requirement.

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occasion, those who do not attend

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could not submit their application to

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and probably

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more

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hard time

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a good job.

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, studying

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university

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give

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a lot of

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for the students and it would be advantageous for them when

applying

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jobs.

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university

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is usually considered

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the best chance to get hired.

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, some industries do not require high education background.

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fields usually need people with more specific

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and skills. Since it usually takes a long time to develop practical

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, these workers tend to skip applying to

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and prefer to work right away. These

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of workers usually have so

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skills that do not

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college

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and it would be a unique selling point in the industries.

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,

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from

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usually gives us better

probabilities

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to get hired

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renowned

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. Another concern is lots of hiring now required a graduated candidate, sometimes

skillful

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and

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experience

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experienced

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people could not be recognized when applying

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same position compared to graduated applicants.