School should teach subjects that are needed for academic success and to pass examination. Practical life skills such as cookery, dressmaking and wood crafting should be taught at home, by family or friends. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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adjudicated primary home skills as a fundamental element which are needful to be taught not in schools and require people to

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that would bring about progress to be successful in trials in educational institutions . In my opinion , every

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is relevant in life whether it

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vocational skills or academic work which I disagree

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. I shall elucidate my points in the forthcoming paragraphs. First to note, going for a course that suits your career is crucial for broadening pathways in future .The core values of individuals vary independently from person to person and with great focus on personal careers we like to focus on

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that would help build our future

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home artistry should be inclusive in all

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educational institutions and not be limited only to particular

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studied based on preferences would help improve academic performance making each student

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in the field of

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he or she has selected to embark on. In a town called Zeba , there was an excellent performance by each ward who attended the L/A Catholic school . Research has it that every child was made to

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in a course

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he/she does well .Not only will it bring a great impact on the individual but will outshine the glory of the institution being awarded

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. Conclusively, home skills should be

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taught in schools In order to allow people to be able to achieve their career plans through education and

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improve the performance of students in their desired

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.