You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,
#minutes #city #vacation #hotel #manager #points #suggestions #recommendations #complaints #addresses
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter regarding staying in your hotel from 21 December to 25 January. During this
period I had a lot of experience. I would like to share something from my point of view.
When I entered reception warmed welcome had been received,Nevertheless
the Add a comma
,Nevertheless
room
was kept super clean with a beautiful view of the hill.Also
your food is delicious and traditional. Add a comma
,Also
However
, there is no changing room
near the swimming pool. Cab facilities are not available who come from the airport and station. Moreover
, the suite room
toilet was littered.
In my point of view, Implement the new men's and women's dressing room
near the swimming pool. It was very use full.Also
arrange a car service from the airport or station from your hotel.Add a comma
,Also
Then
improve your cleaning in your amenities.
I hope that you would consider my opinion . I would like to visit again in future.
Yours sincerely,
Selva.Submitted by selvaselvi06 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite