You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

Dear sir, I am writing
letter regarding staying in your hotel from 21 December to 25 January. During
period I had a lot of experience. I would like to share something from my point of view. When I entered reception warmed welcome had been received,
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was kept super clean with a beautiful view of the hill.
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your food is delicious and traditional.
, there is no changing
near the swimming pool. Cab facilities are not available who come from the airport and station.
, the suite
toilet was littered. In my point of view, Implement the new men's and women's dressing
near the swimming pool. It was very use full.
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arrange a car service from the airport or station from your hotel.
improve your cleaning in your amenities. I hope that you would consider my opinion . I would like to visit again in future. Yours sincerely, Selva.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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