While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise for the accident, - tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl.

Dear Mikey, I'm
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letter to express about the accident
night which caused
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your expensive bowl
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to break
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night when
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was cleaning your dish cabinet after washing it and
suddenly my elbow
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the glass which fell into your expensive bowl next to it. I knew that was your birthday gift from your father which was unique. I'm sorry about the accident and my plan is
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to find the similar one. I knew it
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the same one but it could ease your pain. Regards, Your bestfriend
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