Computers and internet have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Due to the

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advance of high technology and

internet

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the internet

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as it allows

office

worker

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workers

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to

work

anywhere.

Therefore

, it is suggested that working from

home

should be

more

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promoted for both

workers

and

company

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the company

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. From my point of view, I partially agree with the statement of working from

home

is better for

workers

and employers. The following paragraph will discuss

about

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both alternatives. To start with, as

it

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can be seen the outstanding benefit of working from

home

is

time saving

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. The

workers

who live far away from the

office

do not need to wake up early in the morning and add

an

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extra

time

for transportation from residence to the

office

.

This

saving permits**

a

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workers

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workers

to have more

time

to do many things

such

as more sleeping

time

and cooking

time

for

the

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breakfast.

Moreover

,

due to

the COVID-19 epidemic, the government and

company

campaign

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all

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for all

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people to

work

from

home

instead

of working from

office

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to reduce the chances of getting

this

fatal** disease.

On the other hand

, some companies or works may require to have and use the specific

equipments

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that

is

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provided and used only in the

office

.

Hence

, working from

office

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the office

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is overweighted than working from

home

in case of involving with

the

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specific tools that could not bring outside

from

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the

company

. In conclusion, working from

home

has many beneficial points. It could reduce the transportation fee and

traveling

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travelling

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time

.

However

, to support more people to

work

from

home

the

company

have to make sure that all important

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

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and document are provided to the worker to

work

from

home

. The

company

also

needs to provide

a

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good welfare to the worker as well

due to

the additional expense** that might occur

such

electricity

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as electricity

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fee

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from using

lab-top

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a lab-top

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or computer.