You have organized a 90th birthday party for your relatives and invited elderly guests. It was a successful party. Write a letter to hotel manager to provide the feedback. When the party took place. Why it was successful. Thank a staff member who was really helpful.

Dear sir or madam, I am writing
letter to express some positive reviews about the services offered by your team for my grandfather's birthday celebration which was on 10 March 2023.
, I gave surprised my grandfather on his birthday by inviting all my friends and relatives. For
celebration, I booked a green place hall
, your hotel services were outstanding and the hall was decorated with lighting and balloons which look very beautiful. All guest phrase your decoration.
Along with
, your
member is very cooperative and friendly.
, your food quality is very hygienic, and all guests ate and enjoyed the party.
in addition
, your
arranged the games for guests to entertainment like musical chairs, dance. All in all, my party was very successful because of your
. And the manager of your
, caretaker of my grandpa like as your grandfather and provide all thing on the stage. In end, my grandpa gives a blessing to your manager
as well as
your whole team to become a party successful. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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