The line graph below shows how eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The risk of tooth decay, after the ingestion of three different types of
sugars
denoted with the help of the acid levels in the mouth
is depicted in the line graph.
As per the graph, Add the comma(s)
,mouth
it is clear that
the PH level in the mouth declines considerably five minutes
after the consumption of any of these sugars
. Of these, the acidity level is seen the maximum in the case
of cane sugar
, when it registers a PH of almost 3.5. In the case
of fruit sugar
, it is around 4.25 and in the case
of honey
it is about 4.75, which is the lowest.
The risk of decay with the ingestion of Add a comma
,honey
honey
lasts from about 4 to 13 minutes
, whereas
this
is about 4 to 20 minutes
in the case
of fruit sugar
. However
, the highest risk is seen after having sugarcane (3-33 minutes
). It is also
seen that honey
neutralizes faster than the other two sugars
. This
takes only 20 minutes
, which is 10 minutes
lesser than fruit sugar
. Nevertheless
, cane sugar
takes about 35 minutes
to neutralize after its consumption.
Overall
, it is clear that
the vulnerability to tooth decay is seen as lesser in the case
of honey
than in the other two sugars
.Submitted by sukhie626 on
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