The line graph below shows how eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph below shows how eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The risk of tooth decay, after the ingestion of three different types of
sugars
denoted with the help of the acid levels in the
mouth
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is depicted in the line graph. As per the graph,
it is clear that
the PH level in the mouth declines considerably five
minutes
after the consumption of any of these
sugars
. Of these, the acidity level is seen the maximum in the
case
of cane
sugar
, when it registers a PH of almost 3.5. In the
case
of fruit
sugar
, it is around 4.25 and in the
case
of
honey
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it is about 4.75, which is the lowest. The risk of decay with the ingestion of
honey
lasts from about 4 to 13
minutes
,
whereas
this
is about 4 to 20
minutes
in the
case
of fruit
sugar
.
However
, the highest risk is seen after having sugarcane (3-33
minutes
). It is
also
seen that
honey
neutralizes faster than the other two
sugars
.
This
takes only 20
minutes
, which is 10
minutes
lesser than fruit
sugar
.
Nevertheless
, cane
sugar
takes about 35
minutes
to neutralize after its consumption.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the vulnerability to tooth decay is seen as lesser in the
case
of
honey
than in the other two
sugars
.
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