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You recently made an online purchase amd the product was not the same as the description on the website. Write an email to the website support department. your email should follow things: 1. What you purchased and when. 2. Exactly how it is diffrent from the website description. 3. How you would like the company to fix the problem.

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Dear Sir/Ma, Letter of complaint on the blender I purchased from Sony's website. My Name is Olayonu Oluwatimilehin, I am sending
this
 email to express my disappointment in the quality of the A125 series blender I purchased from your website on the 13th of March.
Firstly
, I will like to draw your attention to the difference in the number of accessories listed to accompany the product as they were not included in the product delivered to me on the 15th of March which is the date the product arrived. More so, an example is the additional blades for turbo blending that were expected which are missing from the items delivered. In summary, I will kindly request that
this
 current item delivered can be returned and a new item resent to me, containing all the listed components as shown on Sony's official website. Thank you in anticipation of your response to my request. Best Regards, Olayonu Oluwatimilehin
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