It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to behaviour of people who travel there. Why do think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue?

In
this
contemporary epoch,
tourists
had a negative impact on
tourists
spot,
due to
tourism, which is majorly
due to
the behaviour of people that visit there. I deem that
tourists
are unaware
about
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the
cultural
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and the
rules
of those
tourists
country, which they went there and
also
, there are many measures that can be taken to solve
this
problem. To commence with, owning to several reasons that emphasise, the bad behaviour of
tourists
. Primarily,
due to
less knowledge about the
country
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rules
and ethics
of
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the
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culture. To elaborate, whenever
,
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any tourist went
at
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any tourist spot, they went without acquiring information about the place and followed their own
rules
.
Also
, they
didn't
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able to communicate with
another person
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other people
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, which became
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issue of behaving
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badly
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bad
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in front of
others individual
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other individuals
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while
exploring
at
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the
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a
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place.
For instance
, visitors
are drank
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, when they went to
religious
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a religious
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place
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places
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like
as
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temple
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temples
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. Which is against
thr
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the
rules
of some religions. Along, they
also
drive a car
while
drank
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drinking
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.
Therefore
, it leads to bad behaviour in front of people just because lack
knowledge
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.
On the other hand
, there are some aspects that determine, the solution
of
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this
issue. The first and foremost step is that visitors have higher guider
while
travelling or get information from the internet about
certain
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the certain
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rule
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rules
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, they
wanted
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go there. Which is
complusoryto
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compulsory to
follow it.
Addition
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, agents have to provide information before travelling
any
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to any
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spot, by sending
mails
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emails
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.
For example
, a survey was conducted by the United Nations Census
Bereau
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Bureau
, in the USA, in 2015,a sample of size 1437 containing individuals revealed that 89 % of
tourists
higher
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were higher
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guiders of
those country
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that country
those countries
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. They went
for
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travelling to guide them .
To conclude
, it is clear from the above discussion that
although
there are abundant reasons
of
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behaving
bad
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badly
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by
tourists
.
However
,
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are many measures to resolve
this
problem.
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