The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Town A in two years, 1960 and 2010
The pie chart depicts the number of working candidates in different departments in the years 1960 and 2010 in Town A.
Overall, the manufacturing department stands out with the increase in the percentage of workers comparatively between the years. And
in contrast, the other two sectors have seen their downside in the year 2010 from 1960.
To beginwith, a large number of people preferred to work in 1960 in the service department with a percentage of 41 and
in contrast, It has decreased by almost more than half the percentage in 2010 to 20%.
Similarly, the manufacturing department
alsoshowed some promise at the beginning, but people tend to lose interest in
thisfield too, with a number of only 16% in 2010. Next, manufacturing is unique when compared to the other two sectors.
That isto say, it is the only sector which is not as popular as services in 1960 with adults preferring only 29%. But
due tolarge development in recent years, more than half the people are working in the manufacturing section with a significant rise to 64% which is three times more than sales and services.
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