The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart shows the Total
minutes
(in billions) of telephone calls done by British people, which is divided into three categories over a seven-year period
Overall
,
although
mobile phone use has been increasing over the period, local call using fixed line was the most frequent. In 1995, about 71 billion
minutes
of the local call using the fixed line in the UK.
This
number increased
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and reached its peak at 90 billion
minutes
per day in 1999. After that, the use of fixed lines for local calls dropped considerably over the
last
periods
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and reached the same number as in 1995. National and international calls using the fixed lines were the second-highest call that
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people made in 1995. After that,
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number continue to increase until the end of
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and stood at 60.5 billion
minutes
in 2002.
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