The line chart shows the trends of employment in the USA and predictions to the future.

The line chart shows the trends of employment in the USA and predictions to the future.
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The line graph demonstrates the tendency and predictions of employment in three fields: Manufacturing, Services and Agriculture from 1975 to 2025 in the USA. From an
overall
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perspective,
it is clear that
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there were opposing trends for 3 sectors , the rate of Service job positions was in an upward trend,
while
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Agriculture strongly declined and Manufacturing fluctuated over the period of approximately 50 years. A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals from 1975 and 1980, both the Manufacturing and Services proportions of employment were more or less the same, starting from around 10% in 1975,
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gradually increasing to 15% in 1979 and had an enormous climb to 40% in 1980. After 1980, the two aspects had an adverse movement,
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the Services ratio increased dramatically from 40% to 90% between 1980 and 2025, and the Manufacturing percentage fell sharply from 40% to 10% respectively. It can be concluded from the graph that the number of people who were employed in Agriculture remained stable rate at 80% from 1975 to 1977,
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dramatically went down to 42% in 1979. After 1980, there was another significant decline from 40% to 10% in 2025.
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