The pie charts below show units of eletricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts give information about the percentage of
electricitygenerated by five different resources in two countries during 1980 and 2000.
Overall, we can see that
Australiaused coal as its major source of
electricityin both years,
Franceused more nuclear power sources in 2000.
In addition, the total production of
electricitygrew for both countries over the years. In 1980, 50
electricitywere produced by coal, and
thisfigure rapidly increased to 130
unitsin just twenty years.
On the contrary, in
France, only 25
Moreover, hydropower accounted for 20 and 36
Franceproduced only 5 and 2
unitseach year. It is noticeable that the production of
electricityby using natural gas was reduced from 20 to 2
France's natural resources declined significantly from 25 to 2
Whileoil usage decreased rapidly from 10 to 2
on the other hand,
thisfigure rose slowly in
France(from 20 to 25
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