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Nowdays people make new friends throught social network and internet chat groups. some people think this is good. Others think that face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Technology has massively made communication easier. In recent times, individuals make new
friends
 online via
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social network which some citizen believes is better
while
 others are of the view that physical communication is vital.
This
 essay will elucidate both stances and give an opinion
at the end
.
To begin
 with, technology has become part and parcel of our lives which we cannot ignore.
Due to
 technology, there are many apps which
people
 use to chat and make
friends
 online
such
 as Facebook, Whatsapp, Twitter and so on. Individuals can make
friends
 online globally without necessarily meeting the
person
 physically.
Also
, a
person
 may get a friend on social media with the same idea about a particular thing on which they can share ideas .
For example
, there is an app called LinkedIn in which
people
 connect and make
friends
 who are of the same idea in a specific field to communicate and share opinions.
On the other hand
, physical interaction is important because it helps to identify the real identity of an individual.
Also
, the feeling of interacting with a
person
 physically is different compared to online chat. In conclusion, making new
friends
 online helps others to connect to
people
 globally and shared ideas
while
 physical communication reveals the real identity of a
person
. With
this
, the importance of both views cannot be overemphasised. I am of the view that making new
friends
 online is good
due to
 the benefits it gives to
people
.
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