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the diagrams below shwo the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

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The first diagram gives information on how
cement
 is produced
as well as
explanation
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 of
stages
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the stages
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 and equipment needed,
while
 the second one
illustrate
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 the concrete-making process utilising
cement
 previously made.
Overall
, limestone and clay are the raw materials for the production of
cement
, which is made in five phases. Once
cement
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the cement
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is create
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, it is a fairly straightforward process to convert it
in
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 concrete. Looking at the first diagram,
it is clear that
 limestone and clay have to be crushed so that a fine powder can
be obtain
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.
This
 fine substance is transferred into a mixer, which throughout an inclined pipe is linked to a rotating heater. Once the powder reaches
this
 point, the heater starts to rotate clockwise, so that the compacted material does not stagnate in the same area.
Subsequently
, the grinder
at the end
 of the mechanical chain is reached by the heated substance, which grinds it into
cement
. Ultimately,
cement
 is ready to be packed and delivered. When
cement
 is made,
concrete
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 production process began.
This
 material is composed
by
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cement
, water, sand and gravel in different
percentage
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 and it only requires one
machinery
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. In the concrete mixer
is
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 added small stones, which cover 50% of the whole amount of raw material,
then
 a quarter of sand, 10% of water and the rest is
cement
.
While
 these products are thrown in the mixer,
this
 rotates anti-clockwise. After a certain period of time, the concert reaches the final texture that can be employed in construction sites.
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