the diagrams below shwo the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

The first diagram gives information on how

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is produced

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explanation

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of

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and equipment needed,

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the second one

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the concrete-making process utilising

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previously made.

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, limestone and clay are the raw materials for the production of

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, which is made in five phases. Once

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the cement

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, it is a fairly straightforward process to convert it

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concrete. Looking at the first diagram,

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limestone and clay have to be crushed so that a fine powder can

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.

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fine substance is transferred into a mixer, which throughout an inclined pipe is linked to a rotating heater. Once the powder reaches

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point, the heater starts to rotate clockwise, so that the compacted material does not stagnate in the same area.

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, the grinder

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of the mechanical chain is reached by the heated substance, which grinds it into

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. Ultimately,

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is ready to be packed and delivered. When

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is made,

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production process began.

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material is composed

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, water, sand and gravel in different

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and it only requires one

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. In the concrete mixer

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added small stones, which cover 50% of the whole amount of raw material,

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a quarter of sand, 10% of water and the rest is

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these products are thrown in the mixer,

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rotates anti-clockwise. After a certain period of time, the concert reaches the final texture that can be employed in construction sites.