Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home. Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter, mention why you are writing explain why you would like to work from home say how this can benefit you and the company
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to seek your permission to avail “Work from Home” facility to
Change preposition
apply
me
for the next six months. I am hoping that you will grant my application and permit me to work from home.
For the Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
3 years, I am
working with your company. Recently, Wrong verb form
have been
due to
some family ,reasons I shifted to the other area which is significantly far from the office. Commuting from there regularly is difficult for me because of the heavy traffic in our city. It took around 2 hours of mine. As a result
, it increases stress and I am getting disturbance
at work. Replace the word
disturbed
Although
I am
trying my level best to manage the situation, my productivity decreased dramatically. Which Wrong verb form
was
was
never happened Verb problem
had
ever
before.
I believe that if a person is happy and Rephrase
apply
stress free
Add a hyphen
stress-free
then
only they can perform better and more efficiently. Working from the home facility is positive for both me and the organization. It is not only that I can work for a longer time, but also
my accuracy will increase.
Awaiting your positive reply. I believe you will understand my situation and avail this
facility for me from the beginning of next month.
Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely, Jenny SandierSubmitted by mayini711 on
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task response
The letter addresses the purpose of seeking permission to work from home, but it could be more specific in detailing the benefits to both the writer and the company.
coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is good, but the greeting and closing could be more formal and professional.
lexical resource
The language used is mostly adequate, but could be improved with a wider range of vocabulary and more formal expressions.
grammatical range
The grammar and sentence structure are generally good, but there are instances of grammatical errors that need to be addressed.
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