The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart illustrates

proportions

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of two different genders in various age groups who

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physically active in the year 2010.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that at the age of 15 to 24

women

were more active compared to

men

,

while

Men

in the following period of time were at the top in physical activity compared to

women

. To commence with,

women

from 15-24 years old have the highest proportion 52.8 in the chart who was physically fit

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centWhile

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cent while

the

percentage

for

men

was 47.7.

Moreover

,

this

percentage

was changed in the given year for each gender. People in the range of 25-34 have 42.2 per cent for

women

and 48.9

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for the opposite gender.

Therefore

, from 35 to 64 years old the

percentage

for

men

was higher compared to

women

with just above 50% but for ,

women

the proportion was just under 40%.

On the other

hand

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people who were 65 or over has

the

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almost the

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amount of

percentage

in the year 2010.