The line graph presents three common criminal activities in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.

The line graph presents three common criminal activities in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.
The illustrated line graph shows the
number
of criminal activities in the United Kingdom for 35
years
from 1970 to 2005. In general, car theft and house burgling activities rose from the beginning
while
street robbery had only a slight increase. Looking in more detail, the trend for car theft and house break and enter had a similar pattern from 1970 until 1990. The
number
of cars lost always led the figures for crimes committed and the record soared in 1995 with around 1.6 million
cases
. Fortunately, the
number
sharply decreased for the next 10
years
and downed to 1 million
cases
in 2005.
In addition
, street robbery was always the lowest violent
activity
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committed with less than 100 thousand
cases
for
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every 5
years
from 1970 to 1995. The
number
rose to 200 million
cases
in 2000 and remain the same for the next 5
years
.
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