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The graphs elucidate the UK’s household demographics in 1981 and 2001.

The graphs elucidate the UK’s household demographics in 1981 and 2001. As can be seen from the charts, the 2-
person
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households
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 were the most ubiquitous family in 1981 and 2001.
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, the 6-
person
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households
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 were the least popular domestic. In 1981, 2-
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households
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 accounted for 31% which was the most common family in the UK.
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, the ratio of families having three people and 1
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were
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 11% and 14% lower than 2-
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 respectively.
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, the percentage of 6-
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 domestics made up 6% which was the unpopular family, followed by 5-
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 and 4-
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. Over the next 20 years, the data of 2-
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households
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 rose slightly to approximately 34% which was still the most ubiquitous family.
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, the proportion of 1-
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households
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 increased significantly to about 26%.
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, the data of families having 3-
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, 4-
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, 5-
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 and 6-
person
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 all declined to around 2-3% to 17%, 15%, 6% and 2% respectively.

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